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#1 willtam

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Posted 04 February 2006 - 06:33 PM

id just like you thoughts on my website as im a sales rep now for a company that builds your home in crete who knows 1day i might be able to afford 1 myself well we can all dream cant we maybe my lottery numbers will come in tonite!
http://homesoncrete.bravehost.com

please let me know wot u think

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Posted 04 February 2006 - 10:07 PM

The script is not easy on the eye, try another font.
There are some mistakes and missing words in the sentences (gramatical errors)

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Posted 05 February 2006 - 09:05 PM

id just like you thoughts on my website as im a sales rep now for a company that builds your home in crete who knows 1day i might be able to afford 1 myself well we can all dream cant we maybe my lottery numbers will come in tonite!
http://homesoncrete.bravehost.com

please let me know wot u think


'The structure of the villa is guaranteed for the lifetime of the property.'

What do u mean by this? How many years is the life time of the property? 1 year?, 100?, 1000? more? R' u sure u want to have this statement in? It doesn' make any sense!!
Good luck
Ton